Saturday, September 27, 2008

Lesson 4 Patrick

UPDATE: I did some more and inked the best one. The corner of his mouth needs a li'l fixin'


I want to make a quick announcement that after 14 years of waiting, the beloved Rocko's modern life is now officially out on DVD! I hope you grew up on it, but if not don't worry because you'll probably appreciate it a lot more now, since it is about being a young adult. Extremely clever, hilariously irreverent and beautifully animated. It was overshadowed by Ren & Stimpy, but it is just as good in most respects. Nick sure knew what it was doing back then.



(first post)

This is actually my 5th try for this lesson. Don't be fooled; it's not as accurate is it might look, I'm very unhappy with how the face looks in general. I'm gonna try more this weekend

8 comments:

Gabriele_Gabba said...

Lookin' good! How big do you draw?

James said...

Wow, that is really good. I was just looking at all your posts, and I see some awesome improvement. You REALLY got the egg shape down, and the details that wrap around it.

Caleb Bowen said...

Looks very close, Patrick. I try to think of the mouth as 2 separate lines instead of 1 shape. The upper lip hangs over and is more of a bent straight line than an arc. Hope that helps!

patrick said...

Thanks guys! They're about 6 inches Gabriele. Hey, that's a good way to think of the mouth Caleb. I do have a tendency to make it a perfect arc.

Jeremy Brooks said...

Nice job Patrick. I think it's great that this is your 5th attempt. It's amazing how much you can learn through repetition, making mistakes and having to correct them. Keep at it. I think your efforts are really going to pay off.

Wicks for Candlesticks said...

Good job,

You keep getting better. It's just about tightening it all, now.

-David

P.S. you might be interested in this. Joe is selling an E-book on pitching cartoons.

http://www.cartoonbrew.com/books/joe-murray-explains-it-all

patrick said...

Thanks Jeremy & David!

I saw that e-book by Joe, Looks great!

Jim Grue said...

A BEST OF Rocko? Aw man, I want a SEASON set! Oh well. BTW, sorry for not posting here alot. Been kinda busy looking for work. =)