Lesson 3b by Nicolas

Hello, again. This is my latest Lesson 3 egghead. After my previous attempt, I wanted to fix a couple things, like the nose and lip, and also make the head a little longer.

This is the overlay where I've noticed a few mistakes.

Afterwards, I used red pencil to go over the corrected areas.

Also, Gabriele suggested that I also use red to tighten rough lines, so I'll give it a shot.

Critiques and tips are welcome.