Sunday, August 24, 2008

Lesson 1 by Caleb

This is my first sketch:
Then, I made sure to get a better egg shape and did this:

Here's the overlay of the second sketch with the original:
-the head shape needs to be a little wider
-the cheek lines are off and uneven
-eyebrows too big, too far up
-nose too oval, eyes too big

If I draw more, I'll add to this post.


Jeremy Brooks said...

Looks good Caleb. Big improvement from the first sketch to the second. The only advice I could add is to work on varying your line weight. It's a subtle thing that can make a huge difference.

Wicks for Candlesticks said...

Quite an improvement from your first try. The only thing that I can criticize is that there seems to be a slight tilt in the head. It makes the details seem a bit off.

Good job,
David O.

patrick said...

not bad, can't wait to see more