tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1673901165267390958.post4471494054015664344..comments2011-04-07T20:45:18.476-07:00Comments on CARTOON FUNDAMENTALS: Lesson 1 by CalebDavid Omarhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02624678299551525333noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1673901165267390958.post-83887679419127033772008-08-26T16:41:00.000-07:002008-08-26T16:41:00.000-07:00not bad, can't wait to see morenot bad, can't wait to see morePJShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05884962396217343739noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1673901165267390958.post-72851459054552897952008-08-25T22:07:00.000-07:002008-08-25T22:07:00.000-07:00Quite an improvement from your first try. The onl...Quite an improvement from your first try. The only thing that I can criticize is that there seems to be a slight tilt in the head. It makes the details seem a bit off. <BR/><BR/>Good job,<BR/>David O.David Omarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02624678299551525333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1673901165267390958.post-17599370793636847522008-08-25T04:04:00.000-07:002008-08-25T04:04:00.000-07:00Looks good Caleb. Big improvement from the first s...Looks good Caleb. Big improvement from the first sketch to the second. The only advice I could add is to work on varying your line weight. It's a subtle thing that can make a huge difference.Jeremy Brookshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10323932427927282543noreply@blogger.com