Thursday, January 14, 2010

Gabba critique

Hi, nice upload gabba. Hope you dont mind if I make a new post comparing yours with prestons. Your pretty much dead on with the proportions and angles. I think maybe you need to work on shapes though. They're a bit wobbly. Your form could be stronger, things could look more 3 dimensional. I made some notes on some other things. Sorry for my terrible handwriting. Do you have photoshop or some other program where you could overlay your drawings?


Gabriele_Gabba said...

Hey thanks for the great crit Joey!

I think i really agree with the eyes not flowing properly >.>

I need to get my forms to wrap better i think.

Joey Barr said...

No problem. Have your ever used prismacolor premiere? They're really smooth and give a nice clean line. I use peacock blue. I'll upload some drawings on my blog where I used em. Did you make up that Leprachaun you posted?

Gabriele_Gabba said...

Nope that leprachaun is from a warner cartoon called Wearing of the Grin (looney toons gold collection, volume 1)

I've never used those pencils and i dunno if i can get them here, but i am definitly always looking for smoother lines. o_o