Sunday, January 17, 2010

Christine Critique

Hi Christine, Great work! Hope you dont mind if I post a couple things I noticed. You should probably work on getting the shapes to look 3 dimensional. It seems like your getting caught up in details. I would practice just the first step of the dog some more, where preston just gets the basic shape of things. Maybe slow down and analyze the drawing first. Pay more attention to negative space. In the last one I uploaded you put the nose and the mouth too close together. Your eye shapes could use some work. It helps me if I draw a line of action for the eyes.


Christine Gerardi said...

Thanks so much for doing this! It helps a lot. I was having a really hard time with the eyes on that third one.

Gabriele_Gabba said...

Joey i love your explanation of eyes, its really helped me see them more solidly

patrick sevc said...

Yeah, Thanks for these Joey. I'm really bad at putting critiques into words.

I recommend using lines-of-action for everything. Eyes, fingers, snouts, ears, hair, everything.