Hi all, i'm having some issues loosening up with these Kaspar exercises. This is my latest one, please visit my blog (www.mrpaalstudies.blogspot.com) for the others. Comments much appreciated! Cheers,
Paul.
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5 comments:
This looks great Paul, it's funny right away. I could only see a few small things to look for:
-His chin area looks kind of like a beard, it might have something to do with the right side armpit area and the way the bottom 'tip' is shaped.
-the ears might be too different in size. The one on the right is funnier.
Nice work, keep it up.
I'm working on that one right now too. Yours is a lot better than mine. The only major problem I spot with yours is Kaspar's right leg. It seems to be lacking proper structure and perspective. It is an awkward pose ain't it.
A minor critique would be the fingers & toes could use more interesting shapes.
Keep it up!
Thanks guys!
Caleb - now all i can see when i look at it is a beard! :P & yeah, i think the larger ear could use some work, it looks almost like it's not connected to the head.
Patrick - i agree, that leg looks flat, i should make it overlap the foot. His other leg (Kaspar's left) looks a bit small too.
Fingers & toes are tricky - trying to get the balance between making them interesting without being distracting!
Cheers guys.
I agree with patrick's leg analysis. Your face is very pleasing! Actually your lines are pleasing too, you've got the skills man! :D Keep it up!
I posted my attempt of this layout on my blog should anyone be interested in looking at it. Critiques are welcome of course
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