tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1673901165267390958.post2711693943641359902..comments2011-04-07T20:45:18.476-07:00Comments on CARTOON FUNDAMENTALS: Lesson 1 by ClintonDavid Omarhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02624678299551525333noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1673901165267390958.post-40662539149676591572008-09-02T05:48:00.000-07:002008-09-02T05:48:00.000-07:00definitely had a life-like energy!definitely had a life-like energy!PJShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05884962396217343739noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1673901165267390958.post-86944781400124230782008-08-31T13:18:00.000-07:002008-08-31T13:18:00.000-07:00The last one turned out great, i think the oval on...The last one turned out great, i think the oval on the left of the center line is a bit too sharp, you could always go in and smooth it out.<BR/><BR/>Nice box system btw, good to see.Gabriele_Gabbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16393081239254108879noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1673901165267390958.post-10252691606189124492008-08-30T19:05:00.000-07:002008-08-30T19:05:00.000-07:00Hey Clinton,These are really lively, your line wor...Hey Clinton,<BR/><BR/>These are really lively, your line work is really good. They all seem to be moving as I stare at them. You just got to work on your measurement of where things are supposed to go. The left eye (my left) is a bit too far from the vertical guide line. The smile has a difficult shape. You got it right on my left. The egg shape squashes a bit at the bottom, to symbolize weight. It's all minor details. This is looking great!<BR/><BR/>-David O.David Omarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02624678299551525333noreply@blogger.com